This is an excellent easy-listening track; wouldn't be out of place as background music in an expensive restaurant!
Thanks for the kind words. Maybe someday I'll cut a record for some ritzy place, but for now, I'll just stick around on Newgrounds :P
I must say, extremely well done.
The emotions you felt are portrayed perfectly through the medium of music, which requires great skill to do.
I felt a tear come to my eye as I was listening to it, and reading the author comment; so emotive!
Keep up the great work!
I'm glad you felt the music. :]
Nice work, man!
1) It's slightly short (only half a criticism, if I'm honest!)
2) It could do with a boost in the bass to give it some real oomph!
Keep it up!
I might just do that ^_^
The syncopated drumbeat is excellent!!
The dissonance and harsh electronic sounds are really accurate at describing the atmosphere!!
Fuck yeah!! Thank you man. I worked hard on that one.
Good, but misses some things
Great work man!
I love the synthesised melody ion the second half!! Excellent!!
It's only got a 7 from me, though, because the beginning could do with some sweeping notes by the violins - a feature that's just typical of bond. The simplistic opening ruined it, I think, but the main section is great!!
Hope it goes well!!
That´s a really good idea!
I'll change the beginning (except if it's not as good as this intro)
You'll receive a PM from me when it's finished :-)
Not bad...not bad at all
Relaxing, with excellent use of pizzicato towards the end.
Maybe try a version using orchestral instruments instead of synthesisers? Or maybe even change it to a jazz band and swing the rhythms out!
Whatever you do to this, whether you leave it as it is or what, it'll be good. Keep it up!
thx, i was tryin to be "avan guard"
Does what it says on the tin...perfectly!
Top marks for achieving its purpose!
Love the sound for the bass!
This would be great as title music.
I waited...and waited...and waited...
This needs something to give it some drive. I was waiting for something coming in halfway through, like a lovely loud drumbeat, or a ripping bassline.
But no. Nothing.
Think of "In the air tonight" by Phil Collins. That song's fairly boring until the drums come in, but when they do, well, it becomes a classic.
If you add drums, a groovy bassline, or even a simple melody to go over the basic harmony, you'll be onto something.
Is the CD jumping?
I'm sure the theory behind reversing the piece is correct, but in all honesty, the finished product sounded fairly bad.
How about just writing it normally?
I've got to hand it to you though, I could hear some very good harmonies throughout the piece!
It's just a great shame that the technique you used spoiled them.
I look forward to an adjusted version!
Well, I've made the full version already... But my fucking laptop is taking forever to upload. But yeah, maybe I shouldn't reverse all of the instruments.
Shows exceptional talent
This piece is something to be proud of.
Very precise and emotional.
My personal opinion is that the faster passage (from 2:23 onwards) ruins the effect a little. Slow it down a bit, then it will fit in more with everything else.
Thanks for the review.
In my opinion the speed is appropriate though.
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